Plague [words on wednesdays]

The word of the week is:

Plague

Definition:

noun

  1. (usually the plague) a contagious bacterial disease characterized by fever and delirium, typically with the formation of buboes ( bubonic plague) and sometimes infection of the lungs.
  2. any contagious disease that spreads rapidly and kills many people
  3. an unusually large number of insects or animals infesting a place and causing damage
  4.   a thing causing trouble or irritation
  5. archaic used as a curse

verb

  1. cause continual trouble or distress to
  2. pester or harass (someone) continually

An excerpt from The Tenderness of Wolves by Stef Penney:

Now he is seventeen. His Irish accent is quite gone, but in some ways he is as much a stranger as ever. He looks like the changeling he is; they say there is Spanish blood in some Irish, and to look at Francis you would believe it – he is as dark as Angus and I are fair. Ann Pretty once made a laboured joke that he had come to us from a plague, and had become our own personal plague. I was furious with her (she laughed at me, of course), but the words stuck and barge out of my memory whenever Francis is storming through the house, slamming doors and grunting as if he were barely able to speak. I have to remind myself of my own youth and bite my own tongue.

Plague

Photo by Otis Historical Archives National Museum of Health and Medicine

PRACTICE

Write for five minutes, using the word “plague” as fre­quently as you can. When you’re fin­ished, post your prac­tice in the com­ments section.

Kudos to Juliana Austen for using toxic in her daily practice

And if you post, please be sure to give feedback to a few practices by other writers.

My Practice

Grey was the colour of last year, even death became commonplace as one by one, each house divested itself of human life. She watched it happen from a distance, always the outcast, supposedly the weak one with her lame leg and misshapen head, according to them, scaring them to banish her to the edge of the village. Only old Missus Bledsloe spoke to her, but then she talked to crows and cats too, so didn’t really count.

Lydia spoke to no one, never did a word slip from her mouth, not even a whisper or sob. She lived in a silent world, so she silently watched as the plague overcame the village. At first the men buried the dead, then they burned them in a ceremonial pyre, finally they made a bonfire in the confines of one house pushing in one body after another until there were no strong bodies to do the work. At night Lydia, wrapped in scarves around her head covering all but to small slits for her eyes would go down into the village and push the bodies through the windows of the still burning house.

The village buildings joined Lydia in her silent world. This year as the first crocuses pushed through the snow she saw colour other than grey for the first time, she fancied she could feel a smile on her still covered lips but with no one to see it, it didn’t feel quite real. Alone she felt alive, as if reborn like the flowers bursting out of winter cocoons, she had no need of human judgement and she yelped for joy silently, embracing the new life.

About the Author

Suzie Gallagher

Suzie is scatty writer from Ireland trying to write her first novel, entitled The Only Temperance Bar in Ireland. She also writes worship songs, poems & short stories. You can find her at her blog and on Facebook.

  • Paul Owen

    My mouth is dry. This summer has been a plague of heat, and
    it’s tough running around outside for long. I’m more excited than thirsty,
    though. My paintball team is creeping through the woods, trying to capture the
    last flag. The other team must think we’ve been a plague all day. We’re like
    camouflaged locusts taking over all their territory.

    One of them has just spotted one of us. Markers start firing
    over to my right, then everyone starts shooting. Two paintballs snap past my
    head on either side. I try to avoid those things like the plague. It’s no use
    for the other team, though, since after a couple of minutes we’ve tagged out
    most of their team and that last flag is ours. Victory! Time to clean up and
    head for home. Next weekend we’ll deal out paint-filled doom on another hapless
    team. We are the Plague Dogs, after all.

    • http://www.facebook.com/people/Suzie-Gallagher/100001281206171 Suzie Gallagher

      Paul, nice wee piece, well done

      • Paul Owen

        Thank you, Suzie!

    • http://www.facebook.com/karl.tobar Karl Tobar

      I particularly like the line “Two paintballs snap past my head on either side” that little part was a great action sequence.

      • Paul Owen

        Well, it’s happened to me before, although they usually don’t miss my head! Thanks for the note, Karl.

  • Daniel Lynch

    Before I slept, I was plagued by many thoughts. Thoughts of worry, thoughts of angst, thoughts of anything except happiness. The earthquake hit today, the big one. It was one o’clock and I was sitting at my desk, typing away at some forgettable email, when I sensed the buzzing; the feeling you get before it happens. You can feel and hear it, like grinding metal teeth. Then you begin to notice things around you, they begin to shift and sway. The water in the glass next to you begins to ripple, a ceiling light comes to life; swinging like a noose. That’s when the anxiety hits. You begin to worry. Images of worst case scenarios, creeping up in back of your mind. Except this time, the thoughts become true. This earthquake was the biggest the world had seen. I am one of the only survivors.

    I escaped my small apartment by mere seconds before it fell in on itself. My home was now a mess of broken cinder block, cracked pipes and sharp metal. Most buildings in the vicinity ended in a similar fate. Many people in the area came to a similar end. Lucky I am a loner and was not acquainted with anyone in my local area. I felt little remorse for the faceless death around me. I had only worry about my survival and to reach people who are still alive.

    There was just one problem. How can I survive when I am plagued by the thoughts, I fear I will never be released from this chamber of worry. The thoughts consume me like locusts, eating away at my sanity. I cannot escape them, and I fear i never will.

    The only thing I can do us walk. I willed myself toward an unknown destination. Any place but the wreckage of my home. I glance at my scratched watch, 8:24pm. It is dark and I need to find shelter. I scan my surroundings and find there is a bridge across a small river in the distance, Luckily it was in tact, but it was emitting cool grey plumes of smoke from beneath it. Surely someone is under the bridge, a fire keeping them warm. The thought of this maintained my motivation and I pushed onto my new destination.

    Arriving at the old steel bridge, I notice that there are no people under the bridge, only a car that had careened off the edge. It landed on the dry river bank nose first. Its blackened by fire and soot; no survivors. The embers of the burned wreckage could keep me from freezing, so I lay close to the car, but not so close that it would ignite my clothes, just close enough to accept it’s warmth. I stared up at the sky until my eyes became heavy. I fell into an deep exhausted sleep.

    • http://www.facebook.com/people/Suzie-Gallagher/100001281206171 Suzie Gallagher

      Daniel this has great elements to it. I like the biblical reference of locusts and plagues. Every now and then I try to weave a plague of frogs into a piece but so far it evades me.
      I like the loner, just surviving, functioning, disconnected from other humans – Jack Reacher springs to mind!

      • Daniel Lynch

        Thanks Suzie! Appreciate your comment. I re-read over this and notice the errors but noticing them means I am growing, I guess. Thanks for the writing prompt!

  • Sebastian (9)

    There is a dog down the street who is plagued with fleas. She is probably always thinking “Oh what a plague of fleas”.

    • http://www.facebook.com/people/Suzie-Gallagher/100001281206171 Suzie Gallagher

      Sebastian – lol

  • Erika Simone

    The plague had me this time. I knew it. I was beginning to
    feel plagued by the burning sensation in my eyes and the pounding in my skull. It
    served me right. I knew I was a plague to my family. This must be the universal
    justice everyone is always talking about. I figured my parents were just glad
    there was only one and not a whole plague of me. I destroy enough.

    • http://www.facebook.com/people/Suzie-Gallagher/100001281206171 Suzie Gallagher

      Erika you could take this character anywhere. good practice

    • Mirelba

      Oh my! How sad, but gripping… Now where will you take this?

  • K. Jones

    Not great, but this is what came out.

    Today begun like many of the days that had come before it. I woke, I got dressed, I braced myself for the heartache, and then, without giving me a warning, something changed.

    I had been under the impression that when I began college all of the jokes would stay behind me in high school. However, as plagues have the tendency to do, they not only came with me, but had become progressively worse.

    It was never easy coming from a “poor” family. Being “poor”, as most would call it, was a lot like the plague. Anyone in the same room as me was destined to catch the disease. All of their money was going to magically rot away, or at least that’s how they acted. I was perfectly aware that I did not belong at Notre Dame, but in case I were to forget, my fellow peers made sure to remind me of it daily.

    Whispers flooded the college hallways like the plague. Everyday, without fail, I walked into my expecting classroom being welcomed with giggles from the girls, and paper spit balls, flying at my head, from the guys.

    ” You really need to see the Dean about this Kelly.”, Professor Kellet would say after History 102, but it was not worth my time.He couldn’t have known how many times I had been down that road before. I would tell someone what was going on in school, beg for some release,and end up with them thinking I was exaggerating the whole thing. To top it off, it would always leak out that I had told on someone, and then the whole school would do anything they could to make my life more hell. I would not make this experience worse then it already was. I would become deaf to their words, blind to their pranks, and cry myself to sleep when I found sanctuary in my dorm room. I have learned the hard way that it is during weakness that a person gains strength. I only had to endure it for six more years. A blink of an eye really.

    My mother had told me since I was five years old,” Kelly, there are times when God will not put up with things that we will put up with. He wants better for us than we tend to want for ourselves.” I guess this day was the day that God had had enough, because a plague of hope filled deep within me, and his name was Russel Nottingham.

    • http://www.facebook.com/karl.tobar Karl Tobar

      This is pretty great for a practice session. Your character has a lot of feelings and it would be interesting to see her act on them.

      • K.Jones

        Thank you for that.

    • http://www.facebook.com/people/Suzie-Gallagher/100001281206171 Suzie Gallagher

      Good practice K, sounds like a memoir of hope in hopelessness

      • K.Jones

        Thank you. It was forced out lol.

        • K.Jones

          But not a memoir :)

          • http://www.facebook.com/people/Suzie-Gallagher/100001281206171 Suzie Gallagher

            oh well if you need to research poverty – let’s talk!

    • Mirelba

      Keep plugging. Good beginning. Very few (if any) first drafts are “great”. I think it’s time and editing that get it there.

      • K.Jones

        Thank you. But it is not something I want to keep working on really. Just a practice. Just something to use a word with. But you are right. I thank you for that.

  • Robert Fish

    It was really only 5 minutes and I apologize.

    The 2013 Plague

    “We have got to come up with catchy product name for this
    car. All of our collective heads ride on this concept and we will not sleep,
    eat, go to the potty or anything that remotely resembles comfort until we crack
    this bitch!”

    Jim stood up quickly, slamming his chair into the wood
    paneling. “I say we call it the ‘clap’.”

    “Why the hell would you do that?”

    “It is a pleasure to obtain and difficult to get rid of.”

    “Naming a product after a venereal disease is never a good
    idea.”

    “People call their sports cars all variant of devil and why
    not bring in a powerful plague to conjure the proper image. Picture the image
    of an unstoppable powerful and unsympathetic vehicle that appeals to those empathy
    lacking types with lots of money.”

    “Plague, I like the sound of that; it is one of the 4
    horsemen, which is mighty damn macho.”

    • http://www.facebook.com/people/Suzie-Gallagher/100001281206171 Suzie Gallagher

      Robert love the humour in this piece. Good job

    • Carmen

      Haha this was funny. And pretty accurate I think.

  • Jason

    “Plague! You’re like the bubonic plague!” screamed Eva Lorenzo to her little brother. Her brother was sitting on the floor playing with her dolls. At the age of three he does not quite know the difference between her toys and his toys.

    “What is a bu-bon-nic?” asked Jim sounding out each syllable as the word left his mouth.

    “Uh! You are so annoying. Get out of my room. Mom! Get Jim outta my room.” Eva screamed.

    “Eva, you are funny when you yell. I love you, Eva.” said Jim.

    He looked up at her and smiled. He was holding her favorite doll, Raggedy Ann. He had the doll on his lap and was twirling its hair between his fingers. He placed the doll on the floor, stood up and walked over to Eva, who was standing by the door trying to give Jim the not-so-subtle hint to leave. Jim approached Eva and placed his hands around her legs and gave her a hug.

    “Oh, Jim. Why do have to be so nice to me? Huh? Here, take my doll if you want.” she said and went to go pick up Raggidy Ann to hand to Jim.

    “No thanks, Eva. You can keep her.”

    “Hey Jim. You’re not the plague. Sorry about that.”

    Jim walked out of the room with a smile on his face. Eva set the doll down on her bed and stared down at the floor. The floor was looking back and her with its blank face. She looked up and scanned the room. Finally, she settled on the chair at the desk in the corner of her room. On the chair was hanging her favorite new coat. It was a blue jacket with gold buttons that her mother had given her for Christmas two weeks earlier. The jacket made her smile. She suddenly felt better. Didn’t feel quite as bad about her behavior and the way she so frequently treats her brother.

    I need to be nicer. Why can’t I just be nicer to him.

    I need to be nicer. Why can’t I just be nicer to him.

    Eva stood and walked over to the chair. She lifted the jacket off the chair and folded it over her left forearm like a waiter does with a white napkin before he presents a bottle of wine. She walked down the hall to Jim’s room. Jim was cleaning off a compact disk that he was getting ready to stick into his video game system. It was probably some silly kids game Eva thought.

    “Hey Jim. I have something for you.”

    “Hi Eva. Wanna play Spidahman?” asked Jim.

    Eva approached Jim from behind and wrapped the coat around his tiny shoulders. The coat draped off of Jim’s shoulders and fell several inches below his waist.

    “Eva. This is a girl’s coat.”

    “I know Jim. But, it’s my favorite coat and I want you to wear it.” Eva said trying not to sound too nice. “Jim you’re really not so bad. Definitely not the plague.” said Eva with just a hint of sarcasm.

    Eva turned to walk out of Jim’s room. As she was leaving the room she looked over her shoulder and saw Jim trying to clasp the gold buttons with his tiny fingers. Eva smiled and walked off down the hall.

    • http://www.facebook.com/people/Suzie-Gallagher/100001281206171 Suzie Gallagher

      This is sweet Jason, well done

      • Jason

        Thank you, Suzie. I thought it was a “write for fifteen minutes” practice, so sorry it was a little long. Thanks for reading.

        • http://www.facebook.com/people/Suzie-Gallagher/100001281206171 Suzie Gallagher

          Jason, if I stuck to the 5 minutes every week you would see a half sentence sometimes.
          Next week’s practice – I was driven to get that down and it was 500 words and took me 5 mins but when I went to write the post there was a way I could bring it to a better end so I finished it off.
          Time is time but sometimes we have spew forth!

  • Parsinegar

    Hi everyone, this my first try on WritePractice. Kind of loose and inconclusive, but it’s only a warm-up practice.

    - Where is Linda?
    - Asleep. Why?
    - She went pale when I opened her bedroom door this morning. She said she had heard a plague of roaches marching under her bed all along last night. When I entered the room she had wrapped her blanket all around her body and was gazing through the paper window she had sketched the other night. She was drenching in sweat. I asked her why she hadn’t come out of her bedroom and she asked ‘can I sleep?’
    Gwen? Are you there?

    (The sound of TV through phone) Municipality just confirmed that an advanced, modified type of plague has hit the town since 1 a.m. this morning. Normally a bacteria, this micro-organisms are potentially able to reproduce and transmit through open air. Please keep your windows closed and stay at home for the next 48 hours . . .

    • http://www.facebook.com/people/Suzie-Gallagher/100001281206171 Suzie Gallagher

      Parsinegar I like this, it is like the opening to a bigger piece ;-)

      • Parsinegar

        Thanks Suzie. But this is just a haphazard piece. :D

  • Mirelba

    Just because I’m plagued by all the gloom, I sat down to do a lighter plagued piece. Snow is too pristine and pure to allow for gloom: Nothing deep, but a little fun…

    Try as she would, Becca could not relax. She was plagued by the thought that she had
    forgotten something, but couldn’t figure out what. Again and again, she mentally checked off her
    to do list, and what she had accomplished so far.

    Like a plague of ants descending one by one on a picnic
    basket, so too, doubts had begun creeping in, destroying her sense of ease,
    leaving her restless and unsettled. What had she forgotten?

    It was almost time to go to bed, and yet, how would she be
    able to fall asleep like this? Becca
    decided to go through the motions. Maybe
    leaving it for a while, it would come to her on its own. She went through her
    nightly routine and climbed into bed. Becca turned the light off and tossed and
    turned in bed.

    That’s it! She sat up
    in bed and turned on her night light.
    She had forgotten to prepare her to-do list for tomorrow!

    • http://twitter.com/JewelsCat Giulia Esposito

      Oh, I like that whole second paragraph in your piece. It really illustrates how harrassed or plagued Becca is feeling by the thing she’s forgotten. Very nice practice.

      • Mirelba

        Thanks so much! I appreciate your taking the time to comment.

        • http://twitter.com/JewelsCat Giulia Esposito

          You’re very welcome.

    • http://thethoughtfulbuttonhook.wordpress.com/ Kate Hewson

      ha! That sounds like something I would do! I like ant analogy.

      • Mirelba

        Yup, I think we all have these moments. Glad you liked the analogy. Thanks for commenting.

    • http://www.facebook.com/karl.tobar Karl Tobar

      That ant metaphor was top speed! Well done, and kudos on double practice today. Teach me to be like you xD

      • Mirelba

        Thanks! And trust me Karl, you don’t want to be like me… No practice and then 2 in 1 blow? Nah, better to plug daily. And it’s really because of the snow, it made me too light-hearted to be happy with a gloomy piece. Then this morning woke up to EIGHT INCHES OF SNOW in Jerusalem, and it’s still coming down hard and fast. Snow day, no school, no work, no public transportation (for now)- here in the house we’re walking around with big sappy smiles on our faces. Ain’t nothin’ like snow in Jerusalem…

        • http://www.facebook.com/karl.tobar Karl Tobar

          I’m an Iowa boy so I can relate to an onslaught of snowfall… but I have no idea what snow means to Jerusalem.

          • Mirelba

            According to meteorologists, we get it almost every year- but that only means that it forms in the air. Usually it’s mixed with rain so that doesn’t really count to non-meteorologists. Every once in a while, it falls and sticks. Since we’re not equipped for it here (no snow tires, not enough snow plows), talk of snow has everyone running to the supermarkets to stock up on supplies (think war time!) and sometimes they run out of staples, because even an inch is enough to make streets impassable and dangerous to drive. But even with an inch of snow, people go out to build snowmen… Now it’s 8 inches, and still coming down!

            Also, buildings in Jerusalem are all built of Jerusalem stone (that’s what it’s called), which sort of glitters warmly in the sunlight. Seeing it covered in snow gives it a whole different perspective. Google it to see for yourself. All the holy places covered in snow- it’s surreal and beautiful.

        • http://twitter.com/JewelsCat Giulia Esposito

          This is not fair. You’re getting snow in Jerusalem and here it’s Canada it’s melting thanks to aboval seasonal highs and warm rains. I miss the snow!

    • Erika Simone

      I really enjoyed reading this one!

      • Mirelba

        Thanks, Erika!

    • Daniel Lynch

      Liked this!

      • Mirelba

        Thanks!

    • Paul Owen

      I love those doubts creeping in like ants. That’s what it feels like sometimes!

      • Mirelba

        Thanks! It’s amazing, how sometimes one can agonize over a line or an expression, fiddling till it’s just right, and how other times it just…appears!

  • http://twitter.com/JewelsCat Giulia Esposito

    Hi everyone, I came up with a practice I’d like to share. The formatting may be all off again, as I did it in Word first.

    My practice:

    He rubbed his hands over his eyes tiredly, wondering when the headaches
    would ever leave him. They were the plague of his life. He gave an ironic
    chuckle at the thought, knowing full well that the plague of his life was something
    far deeper and darker than headaches. The headaches were just the by product of
    that plague. He hated to think of what really haunted him, hated to close his
    eyes and see her happy smile, hear the child’s delighted peal of laughter, she
    who was ashes and dust now. It was memories and shame that plagued him.

    The headache intensified painfully, forcing him capitulate; it was time for more of the pills. He hated the pills too. He didn’t know which was worse, his head feeling like it was going to split open, or the high, stupid feeling he got from the pills. Pick a plague,he thought as he swallowed the painkiller. Any plague. He certainly enough of them eating at his body and soul.

    He needed help.

    • Mirelba

      Very strong writing. Well done.

      • http://twitter.com/JewelsCat Giulia Esposito

        Thanks! That just made my day :)

    • http://thethoughtfulbuttonhook.wordpress.com/ Kate Hewson

      Great writing, good choice of words.

      • http://twitter.com/JewelsCat Giulia Esposito

        Thanks Kate. I appreciate the feedback from everyone.

    • http://www.facebook.com/people/Suzie-Gallagher/100001281206171 Suzie Gallagher

      I do like dark and deep ;-)

      • http://twitter.com/JewelsCat Giulia Esposito

        Somehow Suzie, I had that impression ;)

        • http://www.facebook.com/people/Suzie-Gallagher/100001281206171 Suzie Gallagher

          Oh Giulia am smiling at this. I try ever so hard not to write dark but it is my default position. Years of darkness but living in the light provide those moods.

  • Mirelba

    Okay, another dismal plagued piece :-)

    “A plague on your houses!” she muttered as yet
    another door slammed shut in her face.
    The old woman trudged off, her basket empty, her stomach grumbling.

    As she entered her house, set off at the end of the village,
    she could see her wee grandchildren sleeping restlessly before the fire. She felt
    their heads; they were both still burning with the fever. Her troubles plagued
    her, giving her no rest. What could be the source of their fever? She feared it
    was the plague, but she had heard no news of anyone else beset by the
    affliction, and besides the fever, there were no other signs. She sighed anxiously. Perhaps it was just the cold and hunger.

    She got up to crush some more of the small supply of herbs
    and grain that she had gathered from the woods and outlying fields. She would try
    to make some sort of concoction that would soothe the little ones. She added
    some hot water and then tried to spoon a bit down their throats, slowly, a bit
    at a time.

    After managing to get some of the drink down their parched
    throats, she sat down wearily. Soon, the old woman sank into an exhausted
    slumber. So tired was she, that she
    barely heard the buzzing of the locusts, as they descended as a plague on the
    fields outside her home.

    • http://twitter.com/JewelsCat Giulia Esposito

      I really like this one. Opening it up with “a plague on your houses” hooked me into the piece. Great use of allusion.

      • Mirelba

        Thanks! :-) Although far from Shakespearean… But after reading everyone’s pieces, the phrase was resonating in my brain, had to use it.

        • http://twitter.com/JewelsCat Giulia Esposito

          It was a good call, it totally worked.

          • Mirelba

            :-)

    • http://www.facebook.com/people/Suzie-Gallagher/100001281206171 Suzie Gallagher

      Mirelba, this is great

      • Mirelba

        Thank you Suzie.

    • http://www.facebook.com/karl.tobar Karl Tobar

      An herb-savvy character is always great to read. I just read the novel “Harvest Home” by Thomas Tryon and your woman reminded me of the Widow Fortune… anyway what I mean to say is good job :)

      • Mirelba

        Thanks! Just read up on “Harvest Home” on Wikipedia, sounds like a grisly read…

        • http://www.facebook.com/karl.tobar Karl Tobar

          I’m a horror fan :D I have to say in regards to Thomas Tryon’s writing, there is one passage I will take with me if not anything else. That’s the part where he is drunk at the Corn Play… the writing is so convincingly drunkard and it is mind-blowingly captivating – I am still impressed. If you have any reading goals this year I’d recommend that book.

          • Mirelba

            Ha! If I can find it here. Maybe next time I visit my mom in NY I’ll take it out of the library.

      • Paul Owen

        “herb-savvy” – I like that…

    • Erika Simone

      These paragraphs captured my interest immediately. Good story-telling!

      • Mirelba

        Thank you! :-)

    • Paul Owen

      Great story, Mirelba. I could feel the woman’s anxiety right away, and now I want to know what happens next!

      • Mirelba

        Thanks, but as Jeff says, this was only a small piece to get the plague going ;-) Working on another large project, but who knows, maybe someday I’ll sit and my fingers will discover where this is going…

  • Mirelba

    Hey Susie, what’s up? First we’re plagued by your choice of toxic, now you give us a toxic description of the plague! :-) Is your work a sequel to the toxic scene from last week. I was about to write my plagued piece, but my husband just called me to see Jerusalem piling up with snow. Yeah! We’ve been anxiously awaiting this all day :-)

    • Mirelba

      False alarm, not piling up yet, but beginning to fall.

    • http://www.facebook.com/people/Suzie-Gallagher/100001281206171 Suzie Gallagher

      I am in toxic confusion plagued by doubts – what else can I say!!!

  • NewbieWriter

    You know, despite the horror stories and panic and fear of the elimination of the human race, I must admit that having the plague really wasn’t that bad. Sure the fever and cramps kind of sucked. And I lost a finger to gangrene. But the doctor said I should have lost a lot more, so I’m pretty pleased. I mean, I got to be interviewed by the newspaper. They showed a really cool picture of me giving a thumbs-up! And I was plagued with get well cards (pun definitely intended!). Some people even donated money. And the best part was….wait for it….I got to be on TV! Good Morning America called and I thought I was going to die!! Not from the plague, but the thought of being on NATIONAL TV. Well, I guess the plague could have killed me. But it didn’t!

    So let’s weigh the pros and cons. Cons: Fever and spasms that honestly didn’t last very long. One finger (and who really needs a ring finger anyway, right?). Pros: Newspaper, money, national TV. Yeah, that’s a no-brainer. Is it bad that I kind of want the plague again? Maybe I’d get my own reality show!

    • http://twitter.com/JewelsCat Giulia Esposito

      I found this piece amusing. It was interesting to see how you took a word like “plauge” and adapted it to a humorous piece.

      • NewbieWriter

        Thanks! It was the first thing that hit me. Being my first Write Practice practice (lol is that what you’d call it?), I wanted to stick to the 5-minute limit. Thanks for reading!

    • http://www.facebook.com/people/Suzie-Gallagher/100001281206171 Suzie Gallagher

      very good newbie – reminded me of an episode of NCIS [not literally] took my head there. New season starts here on Friday night…

    • http://www.facebook.com/karl.tobar Karl Tobar

      This was awesome. I love a person who can look on the bright side ;D

    • Erika Simone

      I was definitely not expecting the positivity in this piece. :) Very creative.

    • Paul Owen

      Nice job, Newbie. Lost a finger to gangrene – ewwww. Your character certainly made the best of things, though!

  • http://www.facebook.com/karl.tobar Karl Tobar

    Great practice Suzie, the part about Missus Bledsoe made me chuckle. I’m always impressed by how much everyone else can write in 5 minutes and then I look at mine and it’s miniscule by comparison… sad day. Oh well, I’m guessing I’ll get–I don’t know if better is the right word. Anyway here’s mine:

    The Mayor looked down into the basket where the old woman’s head stared back at him. The eyes sent chills down his spine; they watched him; the mouth moved. He nearly stumbled backward. The head said, “A plague for a head, a fair trade?” He and the executioner exchanged a glance and the crowd began murmuring, whispering, shuffling with uneasiness.

    The Mayor raised his arms to the crowd and said, “A trick of the light! She is dead, this woman who has plagued our village!” He felt a tickling on the nape of his neck and slapped it, feeling a crunch and his hand brought back a dark smear. He looked out to the crowd and the murmuring rose in volume, people were looking up and slapping themselves. Women screamed. On the ground began appearing specks, moving specks, crawling specks. The faintest of clicks sounded from the ground and more specks appeared. The old witch had cast a plague of spiders on the tiny village.

    • Mirelba

      Good work, Karl, I’m with you on the amount accomplished in 5 minutes. But your bit, have to say that the quality makes up for the quantity (which isn’t bad either for 5 minutes!)

      • http://www.facebook.com/karl.tobar Karl Tobar

        Thanks so much Mirelba. One compliment goes a long way and thanks for that :)

    • http://thethoughtfulbuttonhook.wordpress.com/ Kate Hewson

      EWwwwwwww, spiders!!!! thats a great piece Karl, I really like the idea of the witches head in the basket talking to them and casting the spell!

      • http://www.facebook.com/karl.tobar Karl Tobar

        Thank you Kate, really!

    • http://www.facebook.com/people/Suzie-Gallagher/100001281206171 Suzie Gallagher

      Oh I am itching – good job Karl I really like it

  • Missaralee

    Wow Suzie, your practice is really eerie. Is there more about Lydia? I’m plagued with curiosity!

    • http://www.facebook.com/people/Suzie-Gallagher/100001281206171 Suzie Gallagher

      When I looked up plague I noticed all these medical conditions, I wanted Lydia to have a hooded eye [colloquialism for a blinded eye from birth with an closed eyelid I think] but didn’t think hooded was the right word, back at oxford dictionary and saw craniopagus and so imagined a misshapen head and limp.
      I have no more about her yet but she did intrigue me, whether to keep her silent maybe because of another disability of lips stuck together a morph kind of face like the shapeshifter in Star Trek or Tom Riddle,
      Then there is the whole idea of how will she survive, how did she survive etc etc.
      She is defo in my head so I think there will be more from her…

  • Jeff Ellis

    I liked your practice Suzie! Great visuals :)

    Linus sat alone in the confines of the old church, staring at the giant stained-glass mural of the angel Michael banishing a demon Linus could never remember the name of. A man with feathery wings and a glowing sword, casting away the wickedness of the world. Linus wished it were that simple.

    Thomas entered from the back, poking his head through a doorway and whistling. “Let’s go!”

    “Yeah, alright…” Linus said as he stood and followed Thomas out into the dusty streets of London.

    It seemed as if screams were following them everywhere. Up from the street, down from the rooftops, around every corner. Plague had come to London and the plague was a noisy death. Thomas brought Linus to the town square, where they burned the bodies.

    “You’re doing the right thing, son,” Thomas said.

    Linus ignored him. There wasn’t much comfort here, amongst the ash of human flesh. If there was one good deed that would bare him aloft, it was not climbing onto the pyre today, but sending sweet, innocent, Shayna to the countryside before this madness began.

    • http://www.facebook.com/karl.tobar Karl Tobar

      I like how Linus can never remember the name of the demon; it made him seem like a real person. Good practice Jeff. =]

      • Jeff Ellis

        Haha, thanks Karl! Yeah, I couldn’t remember any demon names myself (or at least I couldn’t remember which Michael would have fought) so I just went with that :P

    • Mirelba

      I like this Jeff! This really sounds like part of a whole piece. You should develop it. I like your description of the angel Michael, and the last paragraph as well. Strong writing.

      • Jeff Ellis

        Thanks Mirelba, I tend to write in the concept of small scenes for my practices. I just hope it doesn’t become habit when I finally sit down to write a longer piece!

        • Mirelba

          So then keep them in an idea box. So many of your pieces sound like something that can be built up into a really good story.

          • http://thethoughtfulbuttonhook.wordpress.com/ Kate Hewson

            I agree, it would make a great story

          • http://www.facebook.com/people/Suzie-Gallagher/100001281206171 Suzie Gallagher

            I agree

    • http://twitter.com/JewelsCat Giulia Esposito

      The line “plague was a noisy death” gave me chills. Good practice!

      • Jeff Ellis

        Thanks Giulia! I’m glad you enjoyed it :)

    • http://www.facebook.com/people/Suzie-Gallagher/100001281206171 Suzie Gallagher

      I love to read your posts Jeff and this is cool. Love it. Well done

      • Jeff Ellis

        Thanks Suzie! I’m glad you enjoy my stuff :)

    • Paul Owen

      I enjoyed reading this, Jeff. Thanks for sharing

      • Jeff Ellis

        Thanks Paul! I’m glad you liked it :)