Preternatural [words on wednesdays]

The word of the week is:

Preternatural

Definition of preternatural

Adjective:

beyond what is normal or natural

Synonyms:

aberrant, anomalous, atypical, deviant, deviate, extraordinary, ghostly, inexplicable, irregular, marvellous, miraculous, mysterious, odd, peculiar, strange, superhuman, superior, supernatural, unaccountable, unearthly, unnatural, unrepresentative, untypical

Here’s an example from Limbus, Inc. by Brett J Talley et al:

Ichabod Templeton hid in shadow, for the ones he feared walked in the light. He clutched a leather-bound book to his chest, eyeing the early evening revellers as they passed. They didn’t notice him, crouching in darkness. Or maybe that was all part of their plan. Lure him into a sense of ease. Make him think that he had finally escaped their gazes. And then strike. No, Ichabod thought, shaking his head against the idea. He had come so far. He would not fail now.

He crept through the alleys and back ways of Boston, hiding himself in the maze of the city. But he was not lost. He knew where he was going, even if he had never been there, even with no map to lead the way. Something inside, some preternatural sense, guided his footsteps.

He found himself in the North End of the great city, not that he would have known the name of that place. He cut through the old burying ground at Copp’s Hill, past the ancient, crumbling tomb of Cotton Mather, into the labyrinth of narrow corridors and side streets north of Prince. He stopped at the mouth of one and stared with sudden recognition at a ramshackle storefront. He had reached his destination. He pulled the old book closer, rubbing his hands along the coarse leather while the setting sun cast longer and deeper shadows than even the one in which he stood. Yes, this was the place. This was his destiny.

PRACTICE

Naturally focus and practice for five minutes using preternatural often. When you’re fin­ished, post your prac­tice in the com­ments section.

Also, extra credit if you use the word of the week in your daily practice!

My Practice

I was raging, from the tips of my toes, a bile of anger rose up my throat, it was as if my hidden preternatural personality had been accosted by some unknown force. Perhaps a god, I had read about a guy who believed he was being followed by a rain cloud because it rained everywhere he went and it turned out the cloud thought he was a god and did indeed follow him.

Maybe I am the goddess of anger, who at my whim mere mortals will part and bow down before me. There had to be a reason I felt such a burning desire to end the lives of many and one in particular. Even in my rage I was thinking along rational thoughts, albeit a skewed rationale.

The day had started so well. Camera equipment all packed in the back of the van, staple food, thermoses of thick, dark, treacly coffee, in the front. Wellies on, jacket to hand if it turned chilly, I was prepared. But things have a way of unravelling. Half way to the shoot I got a puncture and began to change the tyre. No biggie, done it a hundred times, not for me charm school, I was in mechanics 101 from nappies, daddy teaching me all I knew.

But I was late and this guy stopped and offered to do it and for once I let my preternaturally feminine part loose. We chatted and it was fun, a little excursion in the road of life. I didn’t pay attention to what he was doing, looking instead at the nape of his neck and imagining.

Grrr to necks and imaginings. Three miles later I was upside down in a ditch, the tyre had come off completely as I turned a sharp bend and the van hit a small wall and flipped. Stupidly I didn’t immediately put the two events together, probably due to the welt forming across my forehead.

Oooh, but when I did, that is when the seething, uncontrollable rage began. Cameras were broken and the strong aroma of Cuban coffee filled the cab just to entice me to kick the door again. Stranded without coffee.

I went to get my mobile out to discover I had left it at home sitting on the cooker top, how to kill a man and get away with it. I might write a book…

About the Author

Suzie Gallagher

Suzie is scatty writer from Ireland trying to write her first novel, entitled The Only Temperance Bar in Ireland. She also writes worship songs, poems & short stories. You can find her at her blog and on Facebook.

  • http://twitter.com/JewelsCat Giulia Esposito

    I’m having an unusually bad day. Every time I sit down and try to write, the words come out all wrong. I get half way through a scene and realize, this has nothing to do with the story I’m telling. And so I start again, cutting out whole paragraphs and pages to save because I can’t bear to delete them, and then start again. I do this all
    morning. It’s hard work and I’m discouraged. It used to just come to me, with preternatural ease. I could feel the inspiration take hold and the words would bleed from within me onto the page. It was effortless and felt beautiful. And I wonder why
    my characters aren’t speaking to me today. What I’m doing wrong today. If today’s
    stiffness will continue tomorrow. And I’m annoyed because half of the time, the
    inspiration zaps into me when I’m nowhere near pen and paper. Today however, I
    can’t seem to write a single sentence that resonates within me.

    • Paul Owen

      Nicely done – your frustration is palpable! I like that phrase, “inspiration zaps into me” :)

      • http://twitter.com/JewelsCat Giulia Esposito

        Thank you! Glad something from the really bad writing day wasn’t bad ;)

  • Christine

    A preternatural sun rose above the fog that morning, murky, shedding neither light nor warmth on the girl on the path below. Even the trees in the woods had a sinister feel, though she’d always seen them as friends before.

    Sent on a preternatural mission by her quirky uncle Jonas, she walked down the path carrying the box he had asked her to leave beside the dead elm on the far edge of the woods. Someone would pick it up there, he told her. And that was all.

    He’d pressed into her hand a $5 bill as payment for her trouble. She looked down at the bill, puzzled; this was the first time Uncle had ever paid her anything.

    As she walked, she pondered this preternatural affair. Would she see the person awaiting this delivery? Would she know them? Did she want to? She shivered.

    • http://twitter.com/JewelsCat Giulia Esposito

      I like the feel to this piece. It’s like anything could happen.

  • Paul Owen

    Well, Suzie, it’s a first practicing with “preternatural”! Good prompt, though.

    It always started this way. The faintest tingling behind my right ear, developing into a blaring claxon in my head. That’s when I had to take action.

    This time, I was sitting at a table writing in my journal when he walked in. I glanced up for an instant, then started writing again. Nothing unusual. Or was there? Something I hadn’t actually seen had registered in my mind. Now I put down my pen and studied the guy as he stood at the counter. With his back mostly toward me, he seemed unaware of my gaze.

    Yep, he was going to be a problem. I have a preternatural sense about these things, and it’s why I’m in this line of work. As the tingling started, I was certain. The man appeared to be human, but wasn’t. And the organization I worked for handled situations with these creatures.

    I closed the journal, checked my apparatus, and stood up as quietly as I could. Time to deal with this monster before anyone else got hurt.

    • http://twitter.com/JewelsCat Giulia Esposito

      Paul, I love this! Are you writing more?

      • Paul Owen

        Thanks, Giulia. I don’t know if there will be more from this character, since he hasn’t told me yet :)

        • http://twitter.com/JewelsCat Giulia Esposito

          I hope he speaks up!

  • Jeff Ellis

    In all of the Eastern Tribes there was no swordsman as skilled as Lou’fun. Even the great masters of the Blades bowed before he prowess with a sword. For decades, Lou’fun wandered the eastern plains, challenging swordsmen and -women in every village he came to. It was late in the Year of the Dragon, under a setting sun, that Lou’fun finally met his equal.

    The girl met Lou’fun in a field outside of her village, astride an angry horse that had violence in its eyes. It’s said of the Plainsfolk that their horses mirror their riders and it was true of the girl and her stallion. She gave the duel no consideration, leaping straight at Lou’fun from her horse, sword drawn. It was a testament of the swordmaster’s skill that he narrowly sidestepped the young girl’s advance.

    Villagers came to watch, giving the duel a wide birth. All around the swordfighters the tall grass of the plains fell in sheathes as slashes and swipes were sidestepped and ducked. The two fought well into the night, more villagers bringing torches to illuminate the field. Lou’fun began to tire, his sword arm weary from a lifetime of constant use. He couldn’t keep up with the girl’s spirit, or her rage.

    “You fight with a proper passion,” Lou’fun said as he clashed blades with the girl.

    The girl brought her knee up to Lou’fun’s stomach, but the master twisted away, riposting without a second’s hesitation. “I owe it to you!” the girl shouted as she smacked Lou’fun’s blade out of the way with her own, driving it into the old man’s stomach.

    Lou’fun laughed, blood speckling his lips. “I thought… you looked like him,” he said and fell to his knees.

    The girl kicked the old man to the ground, placing the tip of her sword to his throat. “You know his name,” she said through clenched teeth. “Say it!”

    “Mar…” Lou’fun whispered.

    “Louder!”

    “Mar!” Lou’fun shouted.

    “He was twice the man you ever were and every bit your better!” the girl said and drove her sword into Lou’fun’s throat. “Murderer…” she said before spitting on the dead master’s face.

    The villagers returned quickly and silently to their homes, taking the torches with them. In the dark, stroking her stallions cheek, Marla wept quietly. She wrapped her arms around the horse’s neck and buried her face in its fur.

    • Paul Owen

      Wow, this is great reading, Jeff. Felt the need to dodge a few blades myself! I liked the horse with violence in its eyes, mirroring its rider. Cool imagery.

      • Jeff Ellis

        Thanks Paul, I’m glad you liked it! :)

  • Sarah Ruiz

    In the distance, tires spun noisily against the slick road and the usual low hum of the dryer filtered through the vents into the study. Stagnant evening air hung thick in the room, clinging to her skin with a familiar desperation. She inhaled deeply, the scent of clean laundry mixing not unpleasantly with the must of her old books.

    “It’s rather late, don’t you think?”

    Reaching up to rub her neck, her eyes flickered lazily and she nodded.

    “A little too late.”

    Across the room, curtains hung the whole length of the wall. Behind them stood an unusually large bay window that opened onto the garden. Faint light crept in along the edges, and the curtain rustled in a night breeze, though the window was fully shut.

    “It’s always been too late.”

    Glancing to her left with half-lidded eyes, she groped for her drink, smiling at the clink of ice cubes against glass.

    “And just what would you have me do?” she said, her voice little more than a whisper in a rainstorm.

    She sipped the drink and the world tilted backwards. Volumes slid from their shelves, papers scattered, and the curtains flew open. White light filled the torn study, and she felt the glass slip through her fingers. Her back arched instinctively, and she shut her eyes. The hum filling the room had transformed into a scream.

    The echo faded in the back of her mind and gripping the arms of her chair, she blinked. The room was as she’d left it. No disturbance to her particular organization; even the pens on her desk had not moved. The light from the garden had disappeared, and the curtains hung just as limp as the damp clothes that clung to her back.

    She smoothed her skirt and checked her hair. As she left the room, she caught sight of the glass, now a crushed, preternatural pile beside the armchair.

  • http://www.buckleadership.wordpress.com/ Justin Buck

    Blues and greens and swirling white colored the marble below me. Floating here harmlessly, we products of American ingenuity (and the American military) day after day experiment with survival. Before we left, tensions were escalating here and there across the globe, but it all seemed so small from up here. The instruments of Science, so busy on Earth, could do nothing to rob Creation of its majesty. Up here, the Universe was quiet, and the World was enveloped in a preternatural calm, man-made electric lights fading in as God’s lantern-light slipped around the marble below me.

    • Marla4

      Justin, I love “God’s lantern”. What a wonderful description. So good.

      • http://www.buckleadership.wordpress.com/ Justin Buck

        Thanks, Marla. I started with a totally different idea, but that nightly fade from the space station leapt into my mind.

    • Sarah Ruiz

      What a great description!

      • http://www.buckleadership.wordpress.com/ Justin Buck

        Thanks, Sarah!

  • mariannehvest

    Carl had a preternatural feeling, or fragment of an idea, or piece of a vision, that the walk he took with Vanessa was going to have repercussions. They walked across the field of bright winter rye leaning into each other their heads bowed together talking against the cold wind. Her dog, a big brown and white pointer went with them. He ran away though the field and then back, then bounded off again. Even he seemed glad to be away from the house, from Ellis, Vanessa’s step-father who was drunk and mean. They walked with their hands in their pockets, their hoodies tied tightly under their chins to keep out the winter wind. Carl saw the birds circling in the sky dipping low and landing. Then they saw the heap of birds. She turned away “I don’t want to see it.” He was thinking it must be a deer when the dog ran up to them. Hamlet had a human skull in his mouth. He dropped it at their feet and stared at them.

    • Marla4

      Oh my word. This is wonderful. Is it part of the book you’re writing? I can see all of this, the rye, the dog, the two walking toward trouble. I love your writing.

      • mariannehvest

        It’s part of the short story that I am taking so long to write that it may as well be a book. The dog does not bring a skull to them in the story but Vanessa and Carl go for the walk. I’m going to keep the description since you like it. Thanks Marla.

    • Steve Stretton

      Loved the description and the beginning is just right. The ending is surprising, yet foretold in a way by the opening sentence. Excellent. Hope you get the story finished soon.

      • mariannehvest

        Thank you Steve.

  • Marla4

    115 degrees. That’s how hot it got last summer. In a state
    where the humidity crushes visitors, the added heat it was too much, even for
    those of us who haven’t passed its borders in thirty-two years. I’m thinking of
    the heat today, as I’m looking across a field where a black and white cow
    munches a bunch of daffodils. The Easter flowers are everywhere, even popping
    up through a crack in the asphalt, on the road that winds by my house.

    Gregory Cemetery (established 1882), just up the way, is
    awash in daffodils. Kids show up after school, their backpacks dropped by the
    fence, and they bounce across the graves, pulling up the yellow flowers. It
    doesn’t matter. The flowers renew overnight, the sight like a Hollywood prop
    where plywood turns to creek beds, and a green screen can become an entire town
    in Italy.

    Last summer, when thirty-two people succumbed to the
    preternatural weather, the flowers failed, save the old roses that love mistreatment.
    I’d go outside and clip a few, the sun beating down even then, so that I had to
    swig water soon as I got back inside.
    The air conditioner near about exploded.
    I saw a documentary saying we caused global warming by our need for
    chilly air. And I said right directly at
    the TV, ‘You ever been to Arkansas in August?’ which I know they couldn’t
    hear. But still.

    My daddy loved the heat. Never wore a short-sleeved shirt.
    Wore an undershirt, too, every single day. He was fair skinned, and blue eyed,
    and full of skin cancer by the time he was forty. The doctor burned off patches
    of his skin every other month. Started calling Daddy Bass Boat, because that’s
    what daddy was funding, what with all the costs associated with having your
    skin charred.

    We couldn’t get Daddy to buy an air conditioner. He lived
    beneath a water cooler that slung mist across the house, dampening the
    bedclothes and causing us to put grains of raw rice in the salt shaker, to soak
    up the damp.

    I spent last summer putting ice out for the chickens.
    Fretting over the dogs. An old oak toppled during a thunderstorm, so dry was
    the land it couldn’t hold the roots in. Even now I worry over summer. The
    daffodils aren’t enough to convince me of a wet spring and easy summer. The
    world is turning on us and we sit in air conditioned houses and worry over it.
    I hear Al Gore lamenting us all, a world that won’t listen to reason. He talks
    my language – that Tennessee drawl – and it makes me wonder what Tipper left
    him. There must be a reason after all those years.

    If I could change a thing, it would be the weather. Not
    money, no sir, keep your money. Not peace. Who can believe in peace at a time
    like this? I’d bring back seasons – cold winters, breezy springs, not-to-hot
    summers, falls when the leaves whisper to the ground. I’d change it all in a minute if I could. I
    think peace might follow, I surely do think it might.

    • mariannehvest

      I don’t know why I try to comment on your writing Marla. I’m getting tired of writing “I love this!”, but I don’t know how to do you justice. I think the thing I like best about this is the tone. I feel like you are talking to me. I like the pace and the tone. I like that you are writing about what I think about every time I look outside. I love the image of the children in the graveyard. I wish this was on the front page of every newspaper in the world today.

      • Marla4

        Thanks Marianne. I feel the same way about your writing. I guess we worry alike!

      • http://www.buckleadership.wordpress.com/ Justin Buck

        Loved that image, too. Here’s the amazing thing: the children are all little Grim Reapers, the flowers signifying the uncertainty of our own short lives.

    • http://www.buckleadership.wordpress.com/ Justin Buck

      Bravo! From a fellow Arkansan, your words ripple in my heart, but your subject swelters on my skin. Great job.

      • Marla4

        Yay! Justin. Where are you in Arkansas.

        • http://www.buckleadership.wordpress.com/ Justin Buck

          I live/work/play in Hot Springs.

    • Sarah Ruiz

      This is lovely, especially the cemetery “awash in daffodils”.

    • http://twitter.com/JewelsCat Giulia Esposito

      This is lovely, it draws the reader right in. I especially love the last paragraph.

  • Kathryn Pritchett

    Alice picked up her knitting and tried to focus on the
    stitches at hand. Slip one, knit one, knit the stitched stitch. Repeat to
    end. Then she reversed directions with a purl variation until a herringbone patterned length the color of dirty snow started to unfurl satisfyingly below her needles. Still something troubled her. She had a preternatural sense that
    something was amiss in the world. It wasn’t until later when she went to pick up the mail at the end of the drive that her neighbor, the tall thin mother who rarely spoke to her, stopped before tucking into her black Mercedes and shouted across the way. “We were robbed today. Thought you should know.” Alice immediately crossed the street and mumbled her condolences, assuring the woman and her silent husband that she hadn’t heard a thing, not a thing. But walking
    back to her front door, People magazine in hand, she knew that she had known
    something was off. And not just the rhythm of her stitches.

    • Marla4

      This is brilliant!

      • Kathryn Pritchett

        Thanks!

    • mariannehvest

      This is really good. I think it’s like the beginning of a mystery. It kind of gives me the creeps. I love that the knitting is the color of dirty snow.

    • Sarah Ruiz

      Oh man, this really makes me want to start knitting again!

  • mhmoore

    There are worlds within worlds. There are also lives within
    lives; the miniscule, the magnificent, the crystalline and the opaque. I have
    it on good authority that each and every one serves the purpose to which it is
    intended. Unless of course you live on Thyrdan 3, then all bets are off. A
    place where the preternatural ran rampart and now this new virus; obligingly
    left by a “tourist” from Mars; threatened to completely obliterate in a short
    time what nature had spent eons perfecting.

    • Kathryn Pritchett

      Love the pairing of crystalline and opaque.

    • http://twitter.com/JewelsCat Giulia Esposito

      Great practice! Love the sci fi element.

    • Marla4

      Makes me want to read more!

    • mariannehvest

      Wow. The fist two lines in themselves are just wonderful. Now what’s going to happen?

  • http://www.stephaniesikorski.blogspot.com/ Stephanie Sikorski

    She lay awake, surrounded by the dark staring at the ceiling
    again. Was every writer with a story to tell this obsessed?

    Her mind bounced around like rabid rabbit. She wondered if she
    was normal. It was exhausting being her. She chuckled at the irony. Here she
    lay awake, nonetheless exhausted, writing on and on in her head.

    Not until she believed she had a great first line worked out
    would she allow herself to drift off. Then as her eyes grew heavy she would
    rehearse the sentence over and over vowing to remember it in the morning.

    She never did. When the alarm went off, she wiped the sleep
    from her eyes, looked to see if her husband was still in the bed, and fell back
    on the pillow searching for the story she wrote the night before.

    “Damn!” It was long forgotten, “When will I learn to put a
    notebook beside my bed?”

    It was preternatural. Insane, even! Every day it was the
    same. She would move through the motions, weary and tired cursing the notebook
    that never gets placed next to her bed, longing for bedtime; her only writing time.

    • Kathryn Pritchett

      Recognizable dilemma, but is this preternatural or predictable? Speaking as one who rarely has a notebook by her bedside.

      • http://www.stephaniesikorski.blogspot.com/ Stephanie Sikorski

        You’re probably right. Credit for trying ??

        • Kathryn Pritchett

          Definitely!

    • Marla4

      Oh, I’ve had this experience. Good writing!

      • http://www.stephaniesikorski.blogspot.com/ Stephanie Sikorski

        Thanks everybody. I hafta say … I’ve dipped my toe in a few writer’s circles but I’ve never had such a positive experience as I have on this site. Feels – nice. Thanks again.

    • mariannehvest

      That’s a bad loop for her to be in. I’ve had that happen and I keep a notebook but sometimes I can’t even understand what I wrote. I like the way this is structured though. There is an even progression that makes me move forward easily. I guess I’m saying a I like the idea, the rhythm and the clarity here.

    • George McNeese

      Wonderful peace. Describes most writers.

      • George McNeese

        Sorry. Meant to say “piece.”

    • Paul Owen

      Great practice, Stephanie. A vivid description of what happens to many of us! Thanks for sharing

  • http://www.picturebritain.com Abigail Rogers

    The curve of an arm, that inner curve where the forearm meets the bicep, the gentle, feminine join where the folds of fabric crease just so. That was where he had been working for three hours. This was only the rough first draft, the sketching, erasing, and resketching. Some people said he didn’t know when to stop. He had a preternatural obsession with grasping the perfect line, the exact replica of his niece’s inner elbow. Those few square inches of canvas maddened his dreams and kept him in a constant state of unrest.

    Sonia sat perfectly still the whole time, looking out from her deep-set eyes with solid patience, not sighing or groaning under the weight of her perfect posture or that improbable fur stole. She knew that her uncle—no, not her uncle, the artist—cringed every time she moved. And so she sat in preternatural stillness.

    When the painting was finished—weeks after he had expected to finish it, but delays were inevitable—the artist examined his work. There she was, Sonia, in all her quiet beauty. The canvas might as well have been a photographic plate, revealing the subject with a kind of preternatural reality beyond what was really real.

    (View the portrait here: http://openingmyvein.blogspot.com/2013/03/a-preternatural-portrait.html)

    • Kathryn Pritchett

      Triple credit for 3 usages! Tried to click on the portrait but couldn’t find it.

      • http://www.picturebritain.com Abigail Rogers

        Ah, sorry about that! It misinterpreted the html. All fixed now!

    • Marla4

      Beautifully written. Love the portrait. It’s genius to do it this way!

      • http://www.picturebritain.com Abigail Rogers

        Why thank you :)

    • mariannehvest

      I like this. I can picture the whole thing. I can’t find a picture when I go to the link but I can’ imagine one from you writing.

    • Steve Stretton

      Great description, the painting is so fine, like a daguerreotype in it’s accuracy yet much more than that. Your piece brings it alive.

  • Steve Stretton

    Jack’s old ally, his preternatural sense told him he was being followed. A tingling at the back of his neck confirmed his worst fears. He hurried on, twisting and turning down alley ways and back lanes hoping that his follower would give up. Or was his shadower blessed with some preternatural sense also, so that he could find anyone he wished. In desperation he turned into the nearest shop, not noticing it’s content.

    “Can I help you sir?” The assistant asked, when his nemesis arrived, triumphant. He was trapped. “That’s fifty bucks you owe me,” he yelled at Jack, “You’re not welching out now, you skinflint. I’ve got a cab to run.” Jack sighed, caught again.

    • http://www.picturebritain.com Abigail Rogers

      Ha! Nice turn from taut action to anticlimax.

    • Kathryn Pritchett

      Bonus points for using preternatural twice!

    • mariannehvest

      Ha! Great. It has such a noir feeling, with the “alleys and back lanes” the “shadower” and “his nemesis” and I’m thinking the nemesis is going to be like a cartoonish villain, and it’s a cab driver that he’s ripped off. I wonder if we always think a protagonist is the good guy until we find out differently.