Satellite [words on wednesdays]

The word of the week is:

Satellite

Definition:

Noun

  1. an artificial body placed in orbit round the earth or another planet in order to collect information or for communication
  2. Astronomy a celestial body orbiting the earth or another planet.
  3.  something that is separated from or on the periphery of something else but is nevertheless dependent on or controlled by it
  4. Genetics a portion of the DNA of a genome with repeating base sequences and of different density from the main sequence.

An excerpt The Wintersongs a short story from There Are Little Kingdoms by Kevin Barry

Through and on, North Tipperary, weary hedgerows and chimney pots, and the far-out satellite stepping down from lorries, giving out to phones – and it darkened, as though on a dimmer switch, the morning became smudged and inky.

Losing the wheels, she said, was rough. When you’ve no wheels the options are limited. You’d be inclined to pack it in altogether. Of course if I had sense, I’d be driving still but I rode my luck and it gave out. I turned it over outside Tullamore. They’d every right to take the course of action they took. The startling thing was there wasn’t a mark on me and the car a write-off.

PRACTICE

Write for five minutes, using the word “satellite” as fre­quently as you can. When you’re fin­ished, post your prac­tice in the com­ments section.

Kudos to Audrey Chin who noticed my blatant error. Full of Christmas pud? Work it off with a bit of prose!

Also, extra credit if you use the word of the week in your daily practice!

The Night Lights of the United States (as seen from space) by woodleywonderworks

The Night Lights of the United States (as seen from space) by woodleywonderworks

My Practice
“I saw two shooting stars last night
I wished on them but they were only satellites
Is it wrong to wish on space hardware
I wish, I wish, I wish you’d care”

I listened to words of the song playing in the background, part of the hundred years retrospective, the gallwall flashed images of past famous people. I tried to keep up with the textlink but it was all too fast. All I could do was hang onto the music. A single instrument and a voice. A young voice, a boy’s or a young man’s and the instrument maybe a wooden guitar. What was that called again? The word escaped me.

I watched the screen, concentrating on the background. Tall buildings and green grass, cloth at windwalls, food, lots of it and smiling faces. She shivered in the bleak wind, thinking of her tent, she carried everything she owned on her back as did all the other survivors. There were no fireside hearths and happy children. Satellites, we have those, she thought, little balls in the slate grey skies that record our every move.

I could never imagine wishing on one, what was a star though? It sounded like something from above the sky. Oh Tezinni, stupid girl! I told myself off. The gallwall told us every day, we were the only survivors, we were contained, the universe destroyed but for this small section, the earth almost shattered but for the greatness of President Smith who single handedly saved this chunk. We must not wander past the city gate as mutant beings lurk in their satellite lairs.

We didn’t smile, just survived. The music changed more in keeping with our mood a young girl’s plaintive cry, a child’s. …“In the bleak mid-winter.”

In another place warm well fed children watched on video link the latest episode of ‘The Survivors.’ gleefully from their cozy homes they watched the cast struggling in a post apocalyptic landscape, a satellite community.

About the Author

Suzie Gallagher

Suzie is scatty writer from Ireland trying to write her first novel, entitled The Only Temperance Bar in Ireland. She also writes worship songs, poems & short stories. You can find her at her blog and on Facebook.

  • Parsinegar

    Holding my books in my chest with one hand and eating tokhme (Iranian nuts) with another he was walking back home from school. This has been his routine timetable for two months now to go to school at 7 in the morning and return home at around 1. He had never imagined he could foist such a labor on the comfortist side of himself. Hedonism definitely played a role in transparency or gloominess of the lens he had ahead his eyes to see the world with.
    After the sharp turn he had to take every day, because their building was a few yards stepped-back and the door could suddenly jump out of the bush at the end of the wall walking next you, his books and all his nuts were in a very slow-motion manner floating in air onto the pedestrianized area in front his eyes. Cops were throwing satellite dishes down from the roof but they were hitting the ground with such a harsh thud that you might start to think they are celestial bodies fallen intentionally to us (more religious types usually linked this to God’s will). The noise could even deafen angles, he helplessly thought.
    He was lucky none of those divine gifts found a chance to hit him!
    The cops managed to throw at least 5 satellite dishes down on the ground. He swiftly abandoned his fancy desire to get so much close and touch Earth’s mere satellite while still standing on the mother planet. Satellites, of any kind, were his soreheads now.
    He saw his neighbor’s son enjoying the action. This was, an ideal opportunity for him, after all to see dishes flying downward and get smashed and recorded! He approached the kid.
    - Is this one yours?
    -No, we removed our dish yesterday from the roof.
    -Why?
    -My dad said Mr. cops may come to take all dishes. He says newly awesome cartoons on local TV broadcast, is that true?
    He was silent for a couple of seconds phasing thousand miles away, then suddenly found himself again and gave up thinking and managing to say,
    -Yes. I believe so, kid.
    He bit his lip for being easy about seeing more and more cops in the hood. He had ignored his subconscious alerting him over tighter and tighter protection of the cities. Internal conflict had just started then.

  • mirelba

    Haven’t been for a while. First busy with Nanowrimo and then busy catching up with everything left to slide during November. I’ve also joined a writing group so I’m writing more off site as well. I’m always impressed how much you all seem to get done in 5 minutes. Anyway, here’s my bit:

    Dawn had felt so grateful when she had moved to the new
    school and been taken up by Lila Whitaker and her crew. It was gratifying to be in orbit around
    Lila. Lila secured the best table, the
    best seat, the best whatever along with flattering attention wherever she went.
    But after a month, she was beginning to notice things that she hadn’t taken in
    at first. Little things, like how
    certain people were pushed aside, and dismissed for no good reason. And how the flattery seemed more like fawning
    now. It was beginning to make her
    uncomfortable. She also had begun to
    feel that Lila wasn’t really treating her friends much better. Okay, the disdain wasn’t there, but it was as
    if she saw herself as the sun, and all the rest of them were just her
    satellites, there only as reflections of her own glorious self.

    “Penny for your thoughts.”

    Dawn smiled at Peter.
    “They’re probably worth more than that today.”

    “Why? You
    thinking about the answers to the math test?”

  • http://www.picturebritain.com Abigail Rogers

    This is my first practice session like this, so I went well over 10 minutes to get all my thoughts down. Hopefully I will get more concise as I do this more!

    —–

    I often looked out that window, staring at the starry, starry sky just beyond, and the satellite station floating tranquil. When I was a girl, with astronauts floating through my dreams, I had somehow thought that the stars would seem closer once I got to space. That wasn’t true.

    But I didn’t care about the stars anymore. Right here was all that mattered a handful of gravel. I shoved it in my pocket and for two and a half minutes almost convinced myself to forget about it. But if there’s one thing that’s hard to do on the International Space Station, it’s forget. Every moment you have thoughts crushing down on you. Take it down. You can do this. Take it down.

    “Corporal?”

    I jumped and a piece of gravel went skidding across the polished floor. “Yes, sir!”

    “Aren’t you supposed to be on the lower deck? The satellite station is about to launch.”

    “Er, yes, just a moment, sir.”

    He raised an eyebrow, but passed on. Ah, could I do this? Raging thoughts in my brain battled it out like gladiators slick with their own gore. China’s anti-satellite ambitions, loyalty, fabulous wealth, love–I had no concept who would win.

    A sound came over the PA system, a crackle and a thud. “Corporal Anderson, report for duty on the lower deck. Repeat, Corporal Anderson, report for duty.” The voice was a cold syringe, injecting me with panic. I grabbed the handle and opened the release pod, throwing in the gravel before I could think twice, and seized the remote control. The pod launched, and I guided it in the general direction of the satellite station. There’s still a chance to turn back. Nasty words.

    And that is how the satellite station launch failed. No anti-satellite missiles, no complicated ground-based systems–just a handful of gravel, and one little astronaut.

  • http://www.facebook.com/audrey.chin.9655 Audrey Chin

    what error?

    • http://twitter.com/pootlesuzie Suzie Gallagher

      last week i wrote “pancakes laced with pancakes” instead of laxatives – you pointed it out – very observant!!

  • Jeff Ellis

    I liked your practice Suzie! But you know me, I’m all for getting away from the norm for a bit :) I like the song in the beginning, is that your own creation? Or a song you pulled inspiration from?

    • http://twitter.com/pootlesuzie Suzie Gallagher

      Billy Bragg – A New England – starts “I was 21 years when I wrote this song Im 22 now but I won’t be for long.” He is doing something now with Guthrie’s music. It was covered by Kirsty McCall who died in freak accident in Mexico which surprised her co-singer on Fairytale in nEw York Shane MacGowan cos he thought he would die first. They also sang Miss Otis Regrets which is my favourite story song.

  • Jeff Ellis

    We sit each day, in our tiny wreck room, huddled over rations and wondering when the cavalry will make the jump to alleviate our suffering. It’s as if Earth has forgotten their tiny satellite. I wonder if they hate us.

    When Faster died, I wondered if that would be the end of us, but Arcade stepped forward and now leads with an authority Faster never had. Some people hate Arcade, but I think it might be our only hope.

    There are twelve of us at the moment. Originally we numbered in the thousands, but the assault on the dome has been merciless. They shot down the satellites first. Seven says that’s why Earth is taking so long. We can’t get word to them. Can’t warn them.

    I meet Lids by the window after I’ve extracted what I could from the rations and rest a hand on their shoulder. Lids rests their head on my shoulder and we watch the barely visible ships of the black armada power up another round.

    When the green fire cuts a swath through what was once our science lab, we both know that it is only a matter of time before they find out where we are stationed. Originally Faster had said that the invaders were coming for Earth, but they have yet to send a single ship planetside.

    I think they are upset. Whoever they are, they don’t want the humans getting to the stars, and this lunar colony was the first shot fired in a war they didn’t know they were waging.

    • http://twitter.com/pootlesuzie Suzie Gallagher

      Jeff really good practice you could take this and run with it. Well done

      • Jeff Ellis

        Thanks Suzie. I am feeling more and more desire to continue writing the little projects I start here. I think my subconscious is trying to hell me something, haha!

        • http://twitter.com/pootlesuzie Suzie Gallagher

          I know what you mean. Since doing the fifteen minutes thing and now the five minutes, I feel my text getting tighter – more said in fewer words. Then I read it back and think oh I could put some muscle onto that bone to make it stronger and if I had the energy to go past 15 mins I am sure I could.

          So with that in mind I contacted my old writing buddies over Christmas and two out of three have agreed to consider meeting again with a view to beating a story out of each of us.

          I have gone from no writing group to one online and two physical in the space of eight months. Yea this is it now, draw a line in the sand and cross it. Same for you Jeff. We can do this!!!

          • Jeff Ellis

            You are so write. See what I did there? :P I need to get a writing group in my area too, now that I am writing more!

    • Paul Owen

      Nicely done, Jeff. Now I want to know what happens next!

      • Jeff Ellis

        Thanks Paul! I’m glad you liked it!

    • Mirelba

      Nice. Will we get an explanation later as to why Arcade is an it and Lids is a their (with one head…)?

      • Jeff Ellis

        Nope! It’s up to you to decide.