Trilobite [words on wednesdays]

The word of the week is:

Trilobite

Definition:

Noun

  1. any of numerous extinct Paleozoic marine arthropods (group Trilobita) having the segments of the body divided by furrows on the dorsal surface into three lobes

Mayan Idol by Leonardo Pallotta

Here is an example from Scott Westerfeld’s “Pretties

“They didn’t get the buzzing sound right,” Fausto said, but Tally could tell he was impressed by the costumes. The sparklers in his hair were sputtering out, and people were looking at him, huh?

From inside the party tower, Peris called Zane, who said the Crims were upstairs. “Good guess, Shay.”

The four of them crammed into the elevator with a surgeon, a trilobite and two drunken hockey players struggling to stay upright on hoverskates.

“Get that nervous look off your face, Tally-wa,” said Shay, squeezing her shoulder. “You’ll be in, no problem. Zane likes you.”

Tally managed a smile, wondering if that was really true. Zane was always asking her about ugly days, but he did that with everyone, sucking up the Crims’ stories with his gold-flecked eyes. Did he really think Tally Youngblood was anything special.

PRACTICE

Write for five minutes, using the word “trilobite” as fre­quently as you can. When you’re fin­ished, post your prac­tice in the com­ments section.

This follows on from last week. Imagine finding the same word cropping up!

Also, extra credit if you use the word of the week in your daily practice!

My Practice

Immobile he sat, aged beyond time, the keeper of the secret stared at the altar ahead. How long he had remained glued to his seat after the service he didn’t know. Rays of gold streamed through the windows, a while ago they shone on him, but now progressing slowly to shine directly on the cross at the front of the church.

Time moved, he knew that, because the sun was moving, but for him time had stopped. A trilobite stuck in the ground for thousands of years, he felt the weight of the earth above him. His breathing shallow but steady, ever ready to begin the deep breaths necessary. They were coming for him.

It was not the first time he had endured torture, he marvelled at their ingenuity. No one dared kill him lest the secret die with him but they came close. Yohanan mi-Gush Halav came the closest after escaping a Roman gaol, having to then save his life. He laughed on the inside whilst remaining mute to the dust particles in the sun’s rays.
No creature lived in this desolate church, nor for a ten miles surrounding, a barren place for the dead and dying. All the world waiting, one more week to go and he, Hachakyum, knew the answer. He thought slowly, in time to his heart rate, ever decreasing, if people had spent more time looking after the planet instead of worrying about its end, peace might have reigned.

To anyone passing he looked like a statue, caught in a moment of peace, not that anyone passed. GPS co-ordinates were set to malfunction within a hundred miles, only the very wily ones got through. Each century brought a new adventurer, a president who needed to know, a businessman in shiny black shoes, a dictator in army fatigues. They had all been, they had left without the secret.

So he sat, trilobite from a distant time, watching the sun move, keeping the secret till the last breath, waiting for the next foolish attempt. No words had ever escaped his lips, and none could, not since it was sealed in the eighth or was it ninth century. Caught in time, keeping the most ancient of secrets.

About the Author

Suzie Gallagher

Suzie is scatty writer from Ireland trying to write her first novel, entitled The Only Temperance Bar in Ireland. She also writes worship songs, poems & short stories. You can find her at her blog and on Facebook.

  • http://thethoughtfulbuttonhook.wordpress.com/ Kate Hewson

    Great Practice Suzie! I really love your story!

  • http://www.facebook.com/karl.tobar Karl Tobar

    December 21st had been a gloomy day for us. We sat in the van, parked at the park, the storm from last night lingering in the air, the sky, and our minds. With Slater grieving over the blight of his tomato crops and Aura being depressed about the apocalypse she believed was indubitable, I had little interest in speaking to either of them.

    A clap of thunder raced across the sky and we all cringed. Straightening my spine I looked out the window and sure as my heart was beating the rain started beating the ground. Aura said, “And so it begins. We’re trilobites.” “What do you mean, Aura?” Slater said, “The trilobite, Quincy, is an extinct sea creature; read a book once in a while, hey? That’s what we’ll be. Extinct sea creatures.” I said, “That doesn’t make any sense.”

    “It makes perfect sense,” Aura said. “We’ll be drowned in an epic downpour of the gods’ wrath and in a hundred or a million years, the Aliens or the Lizard Overlords or whoever, they’ll find our bones here, underwater. Like the trilobites before us.”

    • http://www.facebook.com/people/Suzie-Gallagher/100001281206171 Suzie Gallagher

      Karl excellent, good to see you reusing WoW’s practice words. I like the idea of extinction on a specific date. We had one last year too and hey we are still here!

  • http://twitter.com/kacywrites Kacy Nielsen

    Reverb shakes the water column;

    a cascade of pressure reception, too close.

    Straining water flexes weakened cuticle.

    A trilobite hunkers in, rolling, enrolling;

    tumbling away, just in time.

    Compound eyes tac an escape.

    Hungry ones roll into view;

    flaps churn along a sinuous body.

    A wave, juddering trilobite-ian senses.

    Down and down;

    a fragile underside limb tongues between dorsal sutures.

    A gill tasting, breathing.

    Guzzling to fuel greedy instinct.

    Clamps closed again, not swimming;

    Diving

    Sinking

    Fleeing

    A trilobite relies on a flicker’s reaction.

    A trilobite trusts the appraisal of intuition.

    There is no time for hope;

    but if he did, the trilobite would certainly cheer

    for stiffened spines –

    When Opabinia scuttles close for another pass.

    • http://www.facebook.com/people/Suzie-Gallagher/100001281206171 Suzie Gallagher

      Kacy, love the timbre and rhythm

  • Juliana Austen

    The shingle by the door proclaimed the residence of Dr Angus Brown. Will knocked and was ushered into the front room.
    “Doctor will see you shortly sir.” the parlour maid bobbed and hurried out.
    Will stood still, looking around him. The room was set up as a study, with bookshelves and glass specimum cases, there a large portrait of a young man in a kilt above the fireplace. On the large wooden desk, lined up in neat display, were a fine collection of fossils – ammonites, trilobites, brachiopods.
    The door opened and in bustled a man still recognisable as the subject of the painting, though older and stouter.
    “Ah Good afternoon, sir.”
    Will introduced himself and they sat while the Doctor questioned him on people they may have mutual acquaintance with. It seemed this was the start of any conversation in this township at the far end of the world.
    “It is always so good to hear tidings of the home country, I miss it sorely.” Dr Brown proclaimed. “But you have not come to see me to update me on the latest doings in London. How may I be of service to you Captain Chambers?”
    “It is a matter of some delicacy Doctor Brown. I am here at the bequest of Lady Caroline Stoneham to enquire after her niece Mrs Norwood. I understand you know the lady?”
    Dr Brown sat up straighter at mention of the Lady but his face fell at the mention of Caro Norwood.
    “I have sad news for you, Captain” he said “Mrs Norwood died some six months ago.”
    Will inclined his head. “I have been told of her death. The vicar of St Paul’s suggested I speak with you for I wish to have some understanding of how it came about.”
    Dr Brown rose and took a short turn around the room. He looked at Will.
    “What I have to tell you can be nothing but the greatest shock to you, sir. Mrs Norwood drowned but we believe it was not an accidental drowning.”
    Will sat forward.
    “You suspect foul play?” he asked
    Brown shook his head sorrowfully .
    “I am afraid that is not the case, the lady’s pockets were full of stones. It was an act of self harm, Lord have mercy on her soul”
    Will leaned back and considered the man for a full minute.
    “I don’t believe you sir.” he said, quietly.

    • http://www.facebook.com/people/Suzie-Gallagher/100001281206171 Suzie Gallagher

      Juliana this is great. Well done, noticed the shingle too!
      The description of the office reminded me of Grandpa Mackie’s so good work on a beautiful suitably Scottish room.

    • http://www.facebook.com/karl.tobar Karl Tobar

      Good job. “Will stood still,” lol I like that!

  • http://twitter.com/1stwordproblems Jeff Ellis

    Two aged men sat on a bench inside an artificial cave, dimly lit by fluorescent “lights. Across from them, different aquatic creatures swam behind a glass wall. The taller of the two men, dressed all in black, ate popcorn from a small paper bag.

    “Remember trilobites?” he asked with a mouth full of popcorn.

    The other man, shorter and pudgier with a full head of lustrous gray hair shook his head. “Not this again,” he said.

    “They were always my favorite.” Avery pushed a fistful of popcorn into his mouth.

    “In the three hundred million years of the Paleozoic, from the Cambrian period to the Permian, amongst all the creatures that walked and swam the Earth, your favorites were the trilobites?” Linus pinched between his eyes.

    Avery only shrugged. “They kinda creeped me out and I always liked that.”

    “Since the Earth cooled and we graced this world with our presence, we have seen the birth and death of millions, if not billions, of lifeforms and your favorite, your favorite, organism to bless this beautiful planet were the trilobites?”

    “You always do this. You always make me out to look like some dunce, but trilobites had flair!” Avery spoke with his hands, spilling popcorn everywhere. “Remember that shape? That weird…kinda living-…disc thing they had going on? You’re gonna tell me they weren’t original?”

    “Of course they were original. There wasn’t exactly much competition at the time.”

    Avery eased back into the bench, watching a very energetic sunfish sail by the glass, its small black eye gazing at them. Linus waved, but the fish ignored him.

    “So what’s better?” Avery asked.

    Linus laughed a single laugh, deep and haughty. “Are you serious? Look around us! Look at the shapes we’ve taken just to experience the world today!”

    “Humans…” Avery rolled his eyes. “They’re not so great.”

    “Ugh! You could bring Siddhartha to violence! To think I was born to bare such an insufferable old codger as you.”

    Avery regarded Linus coldly before dumping the remainder of his popcorn over the old man’s head. A security guard was forced to remove the both of them several minutes later when their argument turned to violence. He would later tell his wife about the deep marks they had clawed into each other and that he swore he saw them heal as easy as breathing.

    • http://www.facebook.com/people/Suzie-Gallagher/100001281206171 Suzie Gallagher

      Jeff, a great practice. Loved the humour and sci-fi elements. Well done

      • http://twitter.com/1stwordproblems Jeff Ellis

        Thanks Suzie! I’m happy you enjoyed it.

    • http://www.facebook.com/karl.tobar Karl Tobar

      I loved the chemistry between these two. I laughed. Good job!

      • http://twitter.com/1stwordproblems Jeff Ellis

        Thanks Karl, I’m glad I could make you laugh :)

  • soloman247

    Just before its arrival, the
    great dictator, Trilobite. Everyone in there are in argument and no orderliness
    among the member. I guess not because it’s
    skill – full, but just the bad management. The shape of it head convey the
    arrogancy and the moves of the body regard as true dictator. But his attitude
    really poses as a good man in control. A good man in control is the one that
    can leave behind his home key and yet have his people in order.

    • http://www.facebook.com/people/Suzie-Gallagher/100001281206171 Suzie Gallagher

      solo, this is a lovely lwee piece. Good job

  • soloman247

    Just before its arrival, the
    great dictator, Trilobite. Everyone in there are in argument and no orderliness
    among the member. I guess not because it’s
    skill – full, but just the bad management. The shape of it head convey the
    arrogancy and the moves of the body regard as true dictator. But his attitude
    really poses as a good man in control. A good man in control is the one that
    can leave behind his home key and yet have his people in order.

  • http://www.facebook.com/people/Suzie-Gallagher/100001281206171 Suzie Gallagher

    oh yeah, a trilobite is a fossil – like me!