How many of you have been writing for a while? Have a story that you just can't seem to finish? This article is for you—though if you're brand-new, this will eventually apply to you, too. Ahem. There will come a day when it's time to start that story over from scratch.
Let me explain.
How I Learned It Was Time to Start Over
I have a book I've been working on since 2007. In the meantime, I've successfully published several other books, but I keep going back to this one because it's my baby.
It's the life-story of the character who literally ties everything in my series together. It covers fifteen millennia (yes, you read that right). It's big and important and frightening—and I've worked on it and worked on it and added to it and taken chapters away and added more and completed THREE NaNoWriMos entirely with that book and I still never got it done.
I wept over this. Prayed over this. Plotted, outlined, took a couple of courses on how to finish a book, applied every single technique I knew.
It never worked. No matter what I did, this book sputtered and stalled and—would go no further.
But even with those problems, I couldn't just give up on the book. This book contains too much of my soul; it couldn't become a trunk novel. I had to find a way to finish it. So one week, I did something insane and bold: I started over from scratch and started writing it fresh from page one.
Please understand what this means.
It means I took the chapters I KNEW were good, the ones I've had on my website as a teaser for years, and I put them aside as if they'd never existed. I literally started with chapter one, page one, abandoning the thousands of words I'd stood upon as my bedrock and foundation.
And guess what happened?
The words began pouring out. Words that had evaded my grip for nearly ten years suddenly came as easily as if I were telling a story I already knew, that was as comfortable as my own skin.
I wrote 20,000 words in a single week. It may not be a sustainable pace, but that character was utterly available to me, and writing the story from scratch felt like taking a fully-baked cake from the oven: done and ready to eat.
How to Tell If It's Time
I share this long and rambling tale in case you've been stuck too. There will come a time when something you've been working on forever needs to be put aside and started from scratch.
Yes, no matter how good those chapters are.
Don't even copy portions of them over. Don't do it. Just don't.
How do you know when it's time? Here's a checklist for you to follow:
- Do you keep trying to write more from a specific point, only to find the new stuff just isn't right and has to be abandoned?
- Do you keep editing and editing and editing the old stuff?
- Does the beginning thrill you, but no matter how long you've been working at it, you just can't find your way to the end?
- Have you been working on the same !@#$#^ book for more than a year?
Then you, my friend, need a fresh start.
I can't emphasize this enough:
Think of this as the ultimate application of Stephen King's words:
Kill your darlings, kill your darlings, even when it breaks your egocentric little scribbler’s heart, kill your darlings.
Or, to return to my previous baking analogy, it's like trying to work with dough in which the yeast is dead. You can't bring that yeast back to life. You have to start a new batch of dough—plain and simple.
If you've found yourself stuck on the same old story forever, maybe it's your turn to put those old chapters aside, no matter how hard you've worked on them, and start fresh. I promise your story will benefit.
Have you struggled for years with a story that refuses to end? Let us know in the comments.
Which piece have you been unable to finish because it keeps stalling? I want you to take the next fifteen minutes and start that story fresh. Write it as if you've never told it before, and really listen to your characters. When you're through, share your writing. And if you share, be sure to leave feedback for at least three other writers!
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Best-Selling author Ruthanne Reid has led a convention panel on world-building, taught courses on plot and character development, and was keynote speaker for The Write Practice 2021 Spring Retreat.
Author of two series with five books and fifty short stories, Ruthanne has lived in her head since childhood, when she wrote her first story about a pony princess and a genocidal snake-kingdom, using up her mom’s red typewriter ribbon.
When she isn’t reading, writing, or reading about writing, Ruthanne enjoys old cartoons with her husband and two cats, and dreams of living on an island beach far, far away.
P.S. Red is still her favorite color.